Starting a presentation

Posted on February 27, 2008 by Lilian



Hello My dear MCIT class,

I’d like you to watch this short presentation video. Think about the two points below while you are watching the video. Let’s hear what you are thinking about. Leave your comments on the video here and let’s discuss it.

1. How do you see this presentation start?

2. What do you think of the presenter? How effective is he? Is he missing anything? What?

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24 Responses to “Starting a presentation”

  1.   Ahmed Zakaria, on February 28th, 2008 at 9:49 am Said:

    he is very anxios and do not have eye connect, did not use body languge and his voice do not change , did not connect with any body,did not use data show

  2.   Reda Mohamed Aly, on February 28th, 2008 at 9:51 am Said:

    This start of this presentation was booring,confused and wasn’t effective

    1. he was anxious .
    2. he didn’t use eye contacts
    3. he didn’t use body language.
    4. he kept his voice at the same level.
    5. he didn’t introduce him self .
    6. he wasn’t effective in clarifying the subject of presentation
    7. he wasn’t effective with people who attended this presentation.

  3.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 28th, 2008 at 9:57 am Said:

    I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear. Also the prisenter seeme to be very anxious,and he never use his bogy language.There isn’t any eye contact , he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speak.He forget to introduce himself in the first. Fainally his voice isn’t clear enough to be understood

  4.   Ahmed Zakaria, on February 28th, 2008 at 9:57 am Said:

    he is very anxios and do not have eye contact, did not use body languge and his voice monotonous , did not connect with any body,did not use data show.

  5.   Ahmed Zakaria, on February 28th, 2008 at 10:09 am Said:

    he is very anxios and do not have eye contact, did not use body languge and his voice monotonous , did not connect with any body,did not use data show,did not grab attention.

  6.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 28th, 2008 at 10:11 am Said:

    I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear. Also the prisenter seeme to be very anxious,and he never use his body language.
    There isn’t any eye contact , he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speaking.
    He forget to introduce himself in the first.
    Fainally his voice isn’t clear enough to be understood

  7.   ahmed zakria, on February 28th, 2008 at 10:15 am Said:

    he is very anxios and do not have eye contact, did not use body languge and his voice monotonous , did not connect with any body,did not use data show,did not grab attention.

  8.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 28th, 2008 at 10:59 am Said:

    I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear. Also the presenter seems to be very anxious, and he never uses his body language.
    There isn’t any eye contact; he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speaking.
    He forgets to introduce himself in the first.
    Finally his voice wasn’t clear enough to be understood.

  9.   fatma sho'aila, on February 28th, 2008 at 11:23 am Said:

    Hello every body,
    There are many comments on this presentation,
    First of all,The beginning :- he began with “i’m really pleased to be here today ” and he don’t introduce himself .,
    Inaddition to, The eye contact & The body language:-he don’t look at any one to see how he is effective , he don’t make any thing without cross-armed & reading his papers .
    further., he seems anxious & not informative

  10.   Asmahan, on February 28th, 2008 at 6:04 pm Said:

    First of all I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear.
    Also the presenter seems to be very anxious, and he never uses his body language, he keeps closing his hand.
    Farther more there isn’t any eye contact; he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speaking. And he forgets to introduce himself in the first. Finally his voice wasn’t clear enough to be understood

  11.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 28th, 2008 at 6:19 pm Said:

    First of all I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear.

    Also the presenter seems to be very anxious, and he never uses his body language, he keeps closing his hand.

    Farther more there isn’t any eye contact; he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speaking. And he forgets to introduce himself in the first.

    Finally his voice wasn’t clear enough to be understood

  12.   Asmahan, on February 28th, 2008 at 6:42 pm Said:

    First of all I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear.
    Also the presenter seems to be very anxious, and he never uses his body language, he keeps closing his hand.
    Farther more there isn’t any eye contact; he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speaking. And he forgets to introduce himself in the first.
    Finally his voice wasn’t clear enough to be understood

  13.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 28th, 2008 at 6:55 pm Said:

    First of all I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear.
    Also the presenter seems to be very anxious, and he never uses his body language, he keeps closing his hand.
    Farther more there isn’t any eye contact; he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speaking. And he forgets to introduce himself in the first.
    Finally his voice wasn’t clear enough to be understood

  14.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 28th, 2008 at 7:56 pm Said:

    First of all I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear.

    Also the presenter seems to be very anxious, and he never uses his body language, he keeps closing his hand.

    Farther more there isn’t any eye contact; he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speaking. And he forgets to introduce himself in the first.

    Finally his voice wasn’t clear enough to be understood.

  15.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 28th, 2008 at 9:23 pm Said:

    hiii every one

  16.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 28th, 2008 at 9:24 pm Said:

    hiii every one

    First of all I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear.

    Also the presenter seems to be very anxious, and he never uses his body language, he keeps closing his hand.

    Farther more there isn’t any eye contact; he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speaking. And he forgets to introduce himself in the first.

    Finally his voice wasn’t clear enough to be understood.

  17.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 28th, 2008 at 9:46 pm Said:

    Hiiiiiiiiiiii every body

    First of all I think the main idea in this presentation is not clear.

    Also the presenter seems to be very anxious, and he never uses his body language, he keeps closing his hand.

    Farther more there isn’t any eye contact; he wasn’t looking at anyone while he was speaking. And he forgets to introduce himself in the first.

    Finally his voice wasn’t clear enough to be understood.

  18.   walaa awad, on February 29th, 2008 at 11:39 am Said:

    I see this presentation it was boaring ,not informative and also not clear. I think the presenter was anxious and hadn’t self-cofidence.His voice kept same tone, he kept cross his arms all the presentation and didn’t use the body language. In addition he didn’t use the eye contact and also he didn’t grab the attention of audience. He missed tooke about himself in the first of presentaion and he looked like read in the newspaper .

  19.   EMY, on February 29th, 2008 at 11:53 am Said:

    Heloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    About that man there were alot of mistake
    1-he wase very nervousand anxious
    2-he wase booring
    3-he didn’t introduce himself first
    4-his voice wase monotonous
    5-he didn’t use his body language
    6-he didn’t use eye contact
    7- he repeated the words many times
    8- he didn’t start what is this presentation about?
    9- he didn’t establish credibility
    10-he wasen’t grab attention
    that is all
    and finally
    take my advice don’t talk about someone.

  20.   Taher Yahia, on February 29th, 2008 at 5:06 pm Said:

    Hi all ,
    i think it’s was very bad try , he was anxious, pooring
    and his voice was monotonous i cant hear what he say and i dont get what he want from this presentation
    and his body language was pooring and he haven’t self confidence .

  21.   Asmahan Elsayed, on February 29th, 2008 at 6:33 pm Said:

    I’m so sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry
    about the repeating my comment but it is not my mistake
    There is some thing wrong in the blog yesterday that is made this all reply repeating.
    Every time I make submit comment there is a message appear says ERROR

  22.   Mahmoud Barakat, on March 1st, 2008 at 12:00 am Said:

    HI
    first i’m sorry 4 being late to put my omment

    about this man I think it was his first presentation.
    1- He was very anxious.
    2- He didn’t use his body laguage.
    3- he had no eye contact.
    4- He was monotonous.
    5- He didn’t any of the presentation expression not formal or informal

  23.   mahmoud, on March 1st, 2008 at 11:21 pm Said:

    He wasn’t have self confidante, he didn’t use his body languege,and he didn’t use icontacte

  24.   Amed Morsy, on March 2nd, 2008 at 8:52 am Said:

    i so sorry for being late to write my comment
    so i think
    this guy he fail in his presentation because :
    1- he was anxious
    2- ha didn’t have yey contact.
    3- he didn’t use body language.
    4- he was monotonous.
    5-he didn’t use any media to explaine his presentation.
    6- he was un formal.
    7- he didn’t have art of persuasion.

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